Heres the new one. I love the way its sounding so far. As far as lyrics I'm open to changes/suggestions if you (the band) have any. I think there needs to be another paragraph just to even out the verses... and then of course a chorus of some kind.

The Forest Speaks
(C-G)
Four feet I feel, walking across me,
they give a glow that glimmers through my trees
A boy and a girl, perhaps halves to make the one?
A premonition of something bigger to come...

Lets cling to them! with vines to make them stay!
Quick rotted log, fall and block their way!
Now growing ones! My young sapling sons!
Point your limbs, show them the way...

Guide them to me, deep under the earth,
mix two drinks with my berries and rain
the smell will rise, they'll drink my sweet suprise
and they'll turn like us, into the same

Bridge (F-E-G-F) (C)