Something like this might become the first verse in "Gerald's Daydream"
Dove wing tips touched brushed my eyes
tied down by the ropes of night, I lied
across a feild of flowers red
petals shed dreams underneath my head
colors crossed 'neath another bridge
hid the tips of pegasus eyelids
and 'cross the silver milky shore,
I 'held a beauty I had never seen before...
(Let me know what you guys think of this stuff...)
posted by Tom | 1:48 PM
2 Comments:
very good, very dreamy, very Gerald
haha, I'll get my pegasus one way or another... no it can go... whatever... yea in places the words stack up a bit, but im pretty sure i can sing it (it works in my head at least) and will add to its rythmic charm... but mebbe not... we'll see?
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